Friday, September 11, 2015

I tried writing scenes out of order

This post is going to be about writing scenes before they actually take place. Essentially, I am writing things out of order to see how it works for me.

So when I was first starting book 2 of the Knight's Journey series, I decided to try my hand at writing scenes out of order, things that took place later in the book where I knew what was going to happen and I had some good ideas for dialogue and action and stuff. I wanted to try this as a test, because I've always written in a linear fashion. I write what happens as it happens, beginning at the start of a story and continuing until the story ends. I wanted to experiment with something new. I wanted to try writing a scene where I had nothing leading into it and no need to finish.

The first one that I did was a scene with Rowan in the desert. He had lost his way and was in a dire situation that had left him weakened. I wanted him to collapse and be forced to confront a vision of Baird. It was a cool scene, and as I wrote it I found that it was much easier to do because I could pretend that I had already built up the scene so that it is exactly where I need it to be to start writing. I didn't have to worry about the circumstances that brought it about or even how to wrap it up when I was done. I just started a paragraph with Rowan collapsing and went from there.

I wrote a few other scenes like this, but I like this one because it was my first attempt at writing a scene out of order and because I just reached the point in the novel where that scene takes place. I actually used it, I just copy-pasted the whole thing word for word into the chapter and went with it. I was relieved to have it while writing because it made writing the setup for the scene easier. It allowed me to work on building into something existing so I knew exactly where I was going. I hit a point where could place the scene in, and then I had it and it worked very well.


So I think I am going to try to continue this. I have a bunch of scenes where I know what will happen or how I want a specific conversation to go. I can write these scenes and set them aside when I am finished. It will help me establish areas where there is rising or falling action, or where I want to have a big hook or a reveal. So far it has been a fun exercise, and it has worked out well for me. We'll see how it goes when I reach the next scene.

Monday, September 7, 2015

Upcoming Book Signing

So I am going to have a booth at the upcoming Central Coast Book and Author Fair on September 20, and I am getting really excited and really nervous. It's really cool to finally be exhibiting my book, and I will (hopefully) fulfill my lifelong dream of signing a book for someone (it doesn't really count when you know the person). On a side note, I am a very shy person sometimes and one of the most awkward things in the world is being asked about my book. For some reason, my brain freezes at that question and I just kind of stutter some words that may or may not make sense. It is very problematic to have written a book and yet be too shy to talk about it.

So moving on, because we (me and the wife) have never done anything like this, we are totally at a loss about what to expect. How many books should we order? Do we print freebies to hand out? Will there be a lot of people or just a few? These are the things that I have never really thought about when I visit exhibitor booths. But now that I need to purchase the products that we are going to sell and prepare all of the stuff, it is a mystery how anyone ever does this without messing up. I'm sure that we'll figure it out and everything will go well, but until then I will freak out and try my best not to mess anything else up (I already spent hours making printable bookmarks only to find a grammatical error after spending ~$30 on printing - never let a writer edit his/her own stuff because it will only end in shame and error).

Anyways, if anyone happens to be in the Pismo Beach area on September 20, then come by the CC Book and Author Fair and say hi.

Tuesday, March 10, 2015

Re-reading Steelheart

I've been wanting to read Firefight by Brandon Sanderson for a while (I had to wait for Carissa to finish it). So while I waited I re-read Steelheart (previous book). I had read it once before, when I received an advance reader copy at Comic Con, but it's been a while. I honestly forgot how good that book was, and now I am super excited to read Firefight. I honestly finished Steelheart in two days (if I didn't need to sleep it probably would have been one day).

If only this book could be made into a movie. I think that would be amazing, especially with all the superhero films being made (looking at you Marvel).

Sunday, February 15, 2015

Book sale

Hi everyone, my book (A Knight's Journey: The Apprentice) goes on sale for the Kindle tomorrow on Amazon (http://amzn.com/B00RYHOXUK). If you haven't already bought it, you should check it out. It's a fantasy novel about a young boy named Rowan and it will be on sale for only $0.99.

Sunday, February 1, 2015

Fans

So I was looking at the pages for my book on Goodreads and Amazon (I know, I'm vain) and I found that I have fans/followers. I am irrationally excited about this and it's super cool. To those of you out there who have read The Apprentice, I am grateful. Someone even asked when they could expect a sequel, to which I responded that I am going to have a draft done by the end of the year. That may be optimistic, but I like to be optimistic.

Anyways, it's really cool to know people are interested in the series and it's really fun to be able to talk to fans. So if you've read my book and make comments or ask questions in a thread on Goodreads or Amazon, I will probably respond. Also, for those who are interested, I posted a world map on the Goodreads page.

Sunday, January 18, 2015

New storytelling game

A while ago I picked up a copy of Winter Tales, a storytelling board game by Fantasy Flight. For those who don't know, a storytelling game is one that relies heavily on the players to create and tell a story to give the game life. It's a really fun mechanic that is quite approachable.

Anyways, I originally picked up the game because it had some great artwork and a really cool theme. Winter Tales is all about two warring factions (Winter and Spring) trying to gain control of Wintertown. I recently sat down with some friends and played the game, and it was really interesting. We created a great story involving subterfuge by the old woman Dorothy and a failed bromance between the Tin Man and Pinocchio.

I played the writer, a role that tries to make the game evenly balanced and keep the story on track. It was a fun experience and I expect I will play again. Maybe next time I'll record the story that we create.

Monday, June 30, 2014

Making Final Edits to the Book

So I finally went through and made all of the edits I was given by the editor. Reading through the book again, I didn't see a lot of spelling of grammar mistakes, but a number of sentences and paragraphs had a tendency to be lengthy. So I'm making a final run through to rephrase any sentences that disrupt the flow of the text. The good news is that most edits are minor and there aren't many areas that seriously require edits. Most edits have been small and they are few and far between.

Once I'm done with my final edits, hopefully by the end of July, then the Knight's Journey will be done and ready to be printed and published. At that time we will have Kickstarter campaign to print books and try to get it published.